结构设计改良集锦

  
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剑兄：你先开个头，如何？

davidlfxu wrote:
剑兄：你先开个头，如何？

  
好呀，大家看看下面这个图片

我们再来看看老外是怎么说的：英文好的帮忙翻译一下
  
This phone's broken!
This is my new cell phone (See photo a). When I first got it, an instruction sheet in the box said to completely charge the battery before turning on the phone. I charged it up all day. When I tried to turn it on, I pressed the P button on the top right side of the phone (See arrow in photo b). I thought P was for Power.
  
   
  
   
When I pressed the P button, the phone didn't turn on. I tried it several times and then started pressing various buttons on the front of the phone. Nothing turned the phone on. Was the battery charged up enough? I charged it for several more hours and tried it again, but still no luck. I called customer service and they told me to send the phone back. Several days later, I got a new phone. Exactly the same thing happened with the new phone!
  
While complaining about the phone, I showed it to our Nanny. She turned the phone on right away by pressing the red "End call" button (See arrow in photo c). Her cell phone worked the same way! Looking closely at the button, one can not easily see the tiny on/off  symbol. The red "End call" button has to be pressed and held down for a few seconds to turn the phone on and off.  
I have shown this phone to several people and each had difficulty figuring out how to turn it on. These people all had exactly the same problem I had. All were Nokia cell phone users and on Nokia phones, the on/off  button is located at the top of the phone. I'll bet the cell phone company is getting a lot of unnecessary customer calls like mine.
  
This phone has several usability problems. The P button, which many people expect to turn on the phone, does not  turn on the phone. The P button is actually a short cut to a menu of information services such as sports scores and stock market prices. Most people don't expect the red "End call" button to turn on the phone. The on/off symbol on the red "End call" button is too small to be easily noticeable.
  
Design suggestion   
Here are some potential solutions to this problem:  
1、Change the function of the P button so that it turns the phone on and off. This would be easily recognized by Nokia users.   
  
2、Alternatively, provide more obvious labeling for the "End-call" button's on/off function. For example, put a larger on/off symbol  outside the button.  
  
3、Put a temporary sticker on the phone such as "ress and hold this button to turn the phone on and off." This would solve the problem for the first time user.

又长见识了！先谢谢！

孤独剑 wrote:
我们再来看看老外是怎么说的：英文好的帮忙翻译一下  
   
  This phone's broken!  
  This is my new cell phone (See photo a). When I first got it, an instruction sheet in the box said to completely charge the battery before turning on the phone. I charged it up all day. When I tried to turn it on, I pressed the P button on the top right side of the phone (See arrow in photo b). I thought P was for Power.  
   
      
   
     
  When I pressed the P button, the phone didn't turn on. I tried it several times and then started pressing various buttons on the front of the phone. Nothing turned the phone on. Was the battery charged up enough? I charged it for several more hours and tried it again, but still no luck. I called customer service and they told me to send the phone back. Several days later, I got a new phone. Exactly the same thing happened with the new phone!  
   
  While complaining about the phone, I showed it to our Nanny. She turned the phone on right away by pressing the red "End call" button (See arrow in photo c). Her cell phone worked the same way! Looking closely at the button, one can not easily see the tiny on/off  symbol. The red "End call" button has to be pressed and held down for a few seconds to turn the phone on and off.   
  I have shown this phone to several people and each had difficulty figuring out how to turn it on. These people all had exactly the same problem I had. All were Nokia cell phone users and on Nokia phones, the on/off  button is located at the top of the phone. I'll bet the cell phone company is getting a lot of unnecessary customer calls like mine.  
   
  This phone has several usability problems. The P button, which many people expect to turn on the phone, does not  turn on the phone. The P button is actually a short cut to a menu of information services such as sports scores and stock market prices. Most people don't expect the red "End call" button to turn on the phone. The on/off symbol on the red "End call" button is too small to be easily noticeable.  
   
  Design suggestion    
  Here are some potential solutions to this problem:   
  1、Change the function of the P button so that it turns the phone on and off. This would be easily recognized by Nokia users.   
   
  2、Alternatively, provide more obvious labeling for the "End-call" button's on/off function. For example, put a larger on/off symbol  outside the button.   
   
  3、Put a temporary sticker on the phone such as "ress and hold this button to turn the phone on and off." This would solve the problem for the first time user.   

  
将这个翻译后有分加吗？
  
翻译正确可加一分---alexsung

真要这样改吗?现在的手机都是那样开关机的呀,你可以去看说明书嘛!当然除了NOKIA的外!

davidlfxu wrote:
   
  
  将这个翻译后有分加吗？  
  
  翻译正确可加一分---alexsung

  
本来是讲着玩玩，版主当真了，我只好硬着头皮试试，翻译不好，
大家出来指正吧！
  
这是我的新手机，当我第一次买他时，盒子里的说明书讲在开启手机时要将电池充满电，我充了整天，我
试图开启手机时，我按住右侧上方的按钮P（如图B所指的箭头），我以为P是电源开关。
   
我按这个P按钮，手机没有打开，我按了几次，然后去按手机前面板上其他不同的按钮，没有哪个键能将手机打开，电源充电不足够吗？我又充了几个小时且再一次试试，仍然没有开启。我打电话给客服中心，他们要我将手机返回给他们，几天后，我拿到了一个新的手机，又发生了同样的事情。
当我在抱怨其手机时，我把它演示给家里的保母，他马上通过按 “End call ”就将手机打开了，（如图C所示）。她的手机也是同样方式操作的，仔细地看看这个键，一个人不可能很容易明白这个小的开关符号，必须按住且保持这个红色的 “End call ”键几秒才能去开机和关机。
  
我将这个电话出示给其他几个人，每一个人很难明白如何去开启手机，这些人都遇到同样的问题。所有诺基亚的用户，如开关键都如此，我打赌手机公司将获得象我这样的多余客户。
这个手机有几个使用性的问题，许多人认为其是一个开启手机“P ”键却不能打开手机，实际上“P ”键是一个诸如运动分数和股市价格信息服务菜单的简写。其二是大多数人不期望的红色的“End call ”键打开手机，这个开关符号在红色的“End call ”键上太小了以致不容易引起注意啊！
  
设计建议：
1：改变的P键的功能以便手机的开与关，这将使诺基亚用户很容易被认出来。
2：另一种选择方式，为“End call ”键提供一张意思明显得多的标签，例如，放在一张较大的开关符号在这个键的外面。
3：贴一张临时的不干胶纸，印上“按住且保持这个键以使开启和关手机”，这将解决用户第一次使用时的麻烦。

davidlfxu wrote:
   
  
  本来是讲着玩玩，版主当真了，我只好硬着头皮试试，翻译不好，  
  大家出来指正吧！  
  
  这是我的新手机，当我第一次买他时，盒子里的说明书讲在开启手机时要将电池充满电，我充了整天，我  
  试图开启手机时，我按住右侧上方的按钮P（如图B所指的箭头），我以为P是电源开关。  
      
  我按这个P按钮，手机没有打开，我按了几次，然后去按手机前面板上其他不同的按钮，没有哪个键能将手机打开，电源充电不足够吗？我又充了几个小时且再一次试试，仍然没有开启。我打电话给客服中心，他们要我将手机返回给他们，几天后，我拿到了一个新的手机，又发生了同样的事情。  
  当我在抱怨其手机时，我把它演示给家里的保母，他（应为她）马上通过按 “End call ”就将手机打开了，（如图C所示）。她的手机也是同样方式操作的，仔细地看看这个键，一个人不可能很容易明白这个小的开关符号，必须按住且保持这个红色的 “End call ”键几秒才能去开机和关机。  
  
  我将这个电话出示给其他几个人，每一个人很难明白如何去开启手机，这些人都遇到和我同样的问题。所有诺基亚的用户，如开关键都如此，我打赌手机公司将获得象我这样的多余客户。他们全部都是诺基亚的用户，而诺基亚手机开关机键是在手机顶上。我打赌手机公司一定正接到很多象我一样的电话投诉。
  这个手机有几个使用性的问题，许多人认为其是一个开启手机“P ”键却不能打开手机，实际上“P ”键是一个诸如运动分数和股市价格信息服务菜单的简写。其二是大多数人不期望的红色的“End call ”键打开手机，这个开关符号在红色的“End call ”键上太小了以致不容易引起注意啊！  
  
  设计建议：  
  1：改变的P键的功能以便手机的开与关，这将使诺基亚用户很容易被认出来。 （将开关机功能转到P键上，这会使诺基亚用户易于识别。）  
2：另一种选择方式，为“End call ”键提供一张意思明显得多的标签，例如，放在一张较大的开关符号在这个键的外面。为“End call ”键 的开关机功能提供更明显的标识, 例如，在键外加大的开/关符号。
  3：贴一张临时的不干胶纸，印上“按住且保持这个键以使开启和关手机”，这将解决用户第一次使用时的麻烦。

谢谢，derech指教，建议竹斑加分啊！